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production "tattoos have come a long way from being insignias of social outcast to permanent trendy accessories of the odd and famous. as a matter of fact, many celebrities, athletes and rock stars have contributed to the spreading and acceptance of tattoos as an art form. discuss the topic by expressing your personal views and by pointing out pros and cons of having a tattoo in a 300-word essay" Nowadays having a tattoo is normal and accepted from the majority of the people. This opinion has changed in the course of time and some people think that this is not a good thing. From being considerated dangerous and bad now tattooed people are trendy and part of the mass/crowd. Tattoos can be extremely mundane and without significance but can also represent something deep and meaningful. An example for a meaningful tattoo is Rihanna’s angel wings on her chest. She made it to represent girl power; or Emma Stone got a tattoo with her mother to celebrate her mom receiving a clean bill of health after fighting breast cancer for two years. This are examples of tattoos that in my opinion have sense. Because are tattoos that want to significate something and are there to be shown to others to inspire or change something on people’s minds. I can not bear people who get a tattoo just for fun or only because their friends have one and they do not want to be “different”. But I have to admit that tattoos are made to express an idea and if someone wants to do it, it is free to do it with his own body, even if it is a foolish thing. Nevertheless, tattoos can also have cons. They are permanent and it is extremely difficult, expensive and painful to remove them. In addition, a lot of times the ink which tattoos are made of is toxic and can cause serious illnesses. Unfortunately, nobody considers that risk. Finally, I think tattoos are a form of art and they are a way to say your personal opinion and to show your personality, but we have to remember that our body is not a paper. We have to be careful with our skin and think a lot about it before to get a tattoo.

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"tattoos have come a long way from being insignias of social outcast to permanent trendy accessories of the odd and famous. as a matter of fact, many celebrities, athletes and rock stars have contributed to the spreading and acceptance of tattoos as an art form. discuss the topic by expressing your personal views and by pointing out pros and cons of having a tattoo in a 300-word essay"


Nowadays having a tattoo is normal and accepted from by the majority of the people. This opinion has changed in over the course of time and some people think that this is not a good thing. From being considerated considered dangerous and bad now tattooed people are trendy and part of the mass/crowd in-crowd.

Tattoos can be extremely mundane and without significance but can also represent something deep and meaningful.
An example for of a meaningful tattoo is Rihanna’s angel wings on her chest. She made it to represent girl power; (period, new sentence) or Emma Stone got a tattoo with her mother to celebrate her mom receiving a clean bill of health after fighting breast cancer for two years.
This These are examples of tattoos that in my opinion have make sense. Because are tattoos that want to significate signify something and are there to be shown to others to inspire or change something on people’s minds. (previous sentence is very awkward - not sure how to re-write it to express your point)  I can not bear people who get a tattoo just for fun or only because their friends have one and they do not want to be “different”. But I have to admit that tattoos are made to express an idea and if someone wants to do it, it is (he or she is) or less correct, but more common (they are) free to do it with his or her  (or matching the second choice before) their own body, even if it is a foolish thing.

Nevertheless, tattoos can also have cons negatives (or) downsides. They are permanent and it is extremely difficult, expensive and painful to remove them. In addition, a lot of times the ink which tattoos are made of tattoo ink is toxic and can cause serious illnesses. Unfortunately, nobody considers that risk.

Finally, I think tattoos are a form of art and they are a way to say your personal opinion and to show your personality, but we have to remember that our body is not a paper. We have to be careful with our skin and think a lot about it before to get a tattoo.

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Very good - simple errors with pronouns, but expressed very well

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