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Working on an airplane! Hello! My name is Dunia, I’m 22 years and I’m from Spain! I’m sending this cover letter because I want to apply for your cabin crew job offer. I have never worked on a plane before, even to imagine to become a cabin crew. I started to get interested on it after I traveled. I went to Malaysia and there I noticed how awesome it will be to work on a plane! I love traveling so much, I would like to travel all my life. I’m a Graphic Designer and now I’m working in an office. I love my job, I like the place where I’m working, but I don’t see myself working in an office all my life. My company is next to the airport, so I always hear how planes land, and I always ask to myself “Where will this plane come from?”. Then I started to think that maybe my job is in the sky and not on the land. I checked the requirements and I think I fulfill all! I hope you will give me the opportunity to be part of XXX Airlanes family! Thank you very much!

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Working on an airplane!

Hello! My name is Dunia, I’m 22 years old,  and I’m from Spain!
I’m sending this cover letter because I want to apply for the cabin crew job you're offering.
I have never worked on a plane before, let alone thought about becoming a member of cabin crew.

I started to get interested in cabin crew work after I traveled. I went to Malaysia and whilst there I noticed how awesome it would be to work on a plane! I love traveling so much. I would like to travel forever. I’m a graphic designer and at the moment I work in an office. I love my job, I like the place where I work, but I don’t see myself working in an office all my life. My company is next to the airport, so I always hear planes landing, and I always ask myself “Where did that plane come from?”. Then I start to think that maybe my job is in the sky and not on land. I checked the requirements and I think I fulfil all of them!

I hope you will give me the opportunity to be part of XXX Airlanes family!

Thank you very much!


Good! I have been picky in places and made it sound more natural. Watch your tenses! :)

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Wow, that's so cool! In my native language, your name literally means 'the world'! I think you are destined to travel the world and this job will definitely suit you. Good luck!

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