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There is a trip that i plan to go on in the near future I want go to Malaysia in the near future. I will go with my girlfriend. I have made many strategies for this.

First at all, I need buy a ticket. I found Air-Asia is the most cheap airway, and there are many scheduled flight that can non-stop flight to Malaysia. So this airway is my first choice.

Then i need book a hotel. I have used airbnb before. So i think look for a b&b is a good choice too.

I want go to the cities near the sea. So i can learn how to dive. It’s fresh to me. I will start this travel this summer.

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There is a trip that I [always capitalize the pronoun "I"] plan to go on in the near future

I want go to Malaysia in the near future. I will go there with my girlfriend. I have made many strategies for this already planned for this trip.

First at of all, I need to buy a ticket. I found that Air-Asia is the most cheap cheapest airway, and there are have many scheduled flights that can non-stop flight go [do you mean "go back and forth" or "do a round trip"] to Malaysia. So Hence this airline is my first choice.

Then i I need to book a hotel. I have used airbnb before, so I think that looking for a b&b is also a good choice too.

I want go to the cities near the sea so that I can learn how to dive diving [or "take diving lessons"]. It’s fresh to me [maybe say "It will be a new experience for me" to seem more natural] . I will start this travel traveling this summer.

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There is a trip that i plan to go on in the near future

I want go to Malaysia in the near future. I will go with my girlfriend. I have made a game plan many strategies for this.

First at all, I need buy a ticket. I have found that Air-Asia is the most cheap  cheapest airway, and there are many scheduled flight flights that can non-stop flight to fly to Malaysia non-stop. So This airway  airline is my first choice.

Then  Next I will need to need book a hotel. I have used airbnb before. So i think  will look for a b&b. This is a good choice too.

I want go to the cities near the sea so that i can learn how to dive. It’s fresh to me. (?) I will start this travel this summer.


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Ray LA

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