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❶If you can live in the movie world,what kind of works do you want to live ? ❷moving ❶I have already watched various of movies such as action, romance,SF, animation. Especially I love musical movies because I admire the world expressing with singing with fiends,dancing and falling in love, even if you are sad and painful.

❷ Today I moved to Mishima,because homestay was over.This house is flat and Japanese woman and her son are living.I rent her dauther's room as she has gone to San Francisco .They can speak English and Japanese so I’m relieved.

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❶If you can live in a movie world, what kind of works do you want to live in?

❶I have already watched various kinds/types of movies such as action, romance, SF, and animation. Especially, I love musical movies because I admire the world while expressing with singing with friends, dancing and falling in love, even if you are sad and in pain.

❷ Today I moved to Mishima because homestay was over. This house is flat and where a Japanese woman and her son are living. I rent her daughter's room as she has gone to San Francisco. They can speak English and Japanese so I’m relieved.

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