IELTS writing task 3
The flow chart above illustrates the effects of deforestation. It can be clearly concluded that forests have an important role in nature and their disappearance could lead to several problems that are irreversible.
One of the first consequences that loss of forests can arises a greater risk of natural disasters such as burning forests, an increase in drought and soil erosion. However, these stages can accumulate and cause several disadvantages, not only for the environment but also for cultivators. For instance, the degradation of soil and the excessive timber producing reduces the amount of species, thus the biodiversity is decreased. Another phenomenon, which causes headache for cultivators, is the slow hardening of soil which results flood in case of a big rain. Moreover, drought is also a consequence of tree loss, since plants return moisture into the air.
This graph perfectly manifests to mankind that we trigger the environmental problems for ourselves and sooner or later these will have a devastating effect in some countries around the world.
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Well written Pálma!
The flow chart above illustrates the effects of deforestation. It can be clearly concluded that forests have an important role in nature and their disappearance could lead to several irreversible problems that are irreversible.One of the first consequences that loss of forests can arises a greater risk of natural disasters such as burning forests, an increase in drought and soil erosion.
Either ...the first consequence to arise from deforestation is an increased risk of natural disasters...
or ...the first consequence that deforestation can cause is an increased risk of....
or ..A direct consequence of forest loss in an increased risk of natural disasters such as forest fires, drought and soil erosion.
However, these stages can accumulate and cause several disadvantages, not only for the environment but also for cultivators. For instance (for example might be better?), the degradation of soil and the excessive timber producing reduces the amount of species, thus the biodiversity is decreased. Another phenomenon, which causes headache for cultivators, is the slow hardening of soil which can results in flood in case of a big rain (can cause flood might be better). Moreover, drought is also a consequence of tree loss (logging?), since plants return moisture into the air.
This graph perfectly manifests to mankind that we trigger the environmental problems for ourselves, and sooner or later these will have a devastating effect in some countries around of the world.
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