Little dog
I don't have many notebooks here, so, today I want to talk you about a little dog. In my work, there's a dog it's female. She doesn´t have an owner. Her coat is shiny and soft. My coworkers every day give it food. She is out of our office but when is our lunch, we go out and she becomes happy to see us after she runs happily. Everybody here we love it and care it.
In the morning every day, We give them water and bread. Often also we get dog's food.
Check my mistakes and correct them, please. I'll appreciate it.
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Little dog
I don't have many notebooks here, so, today I want to talk you about a little dog. In my work, there's a dog it's female. She doesn´t have an owner. Her coat is shiny and soft. My coworkers every day give it her food. She is stays out of our office, but when it is our lunch, we go out and she becomes shows how happy she is to see us when after she runs around happily. Everybody here loves and cares for her we love it and care it.In the morning every day, Every morning Wwe give them her water and bread. Often also we will also get bring dog's food.
Check my mistakes and correct them, please. I'll appreciate it.
Good job on this writing!
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Little dog
I don't have many notebooks here, so, today I want to talk to you about a little dog. In my work, there's a dog that is female. She doesn´t have an owner. Her coat is shiny and soft. My coworkers every day give it food. She is out (outside) of our office but when it is our lunch, we go out and she becomes happy to see us. Afterwards, after she runs happily. Everybody here loves it her and cares for it her.In the morning every day, we give her water and bread. Often also we get dog food.
Check my mistakes and correct them, please. I'll appreciate it.
Well done! Very enjoyable story!
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Little dog
I don't have many notebook entries here, so, today I want to talk to you about a little dog. At my work, there's a dog and it's female. She doesn´t have an owner. Her coat is shiny and soft. My coworkers give her food every day. She is out of our office but during lunch time, we go out and she runs happily as she is happy to see us. Everybody here loves and cares for her.Every morning, we give her water and bread. Often we also get dog food.
Check my mistakes and correct them, please. I'll appreciate it.
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Little dog
I don't have many notebooks here, so, today I want to talk you about a little dog. At my workplace, there's a female dog*. She doesn´t have an owner. Her coat is shiny and soft. My coworkers every day give it food every day. She is not in our office but at lunch, we go out and she is happy to see us and she runs happily. Everybody here loves it and care it.Every morning, we give it water and bread. We often also get dog's food.
Check my mistakes and correct them, please. I'll appreciate it.
*the word for a female dog is bitch, but that has an unpleasant 2nd meaning.
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