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Essay on Table/Charts I felt I have to repeat before/after refurbishment many times while writing this essay. Are there any other words that can be paraphrased? Thank you! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The table compares the numbers of people who visited Ashdown Museum before and after its refurbishment. The pie charts show information about the proportions of visitors’ satisfaction during the same periods. It is clear that more visitors went to the refurbished museum. Also, they felt more satisfied with this museum. Before refurbishment, Ashdown Museum received only 74,000 tourists, but this figure rose by 16,000 after refurbishing. While half of the people who visited the unrefurbished museum were dissatisfied or very dissatisfied with their visit, only one-fifth of visitors gave these ratings to the refurbished museum. The proportion of visitors who felt satisfied or very satisfied with their visit to the museum before and after its refurbishment increased from 45% to a massive 75%. To be precise, only 30% of them was satisfied in the year the museum had not been refurbished, rising by 10% in the year it was refurbished. The number of tourists who felt very satisfied after refurbishment was more than doubled that of the period before refurbishing, with figures increasing from 15% to 35.

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