Building on the best edit so far...I hope I did not lose the context of the original (no time to check right now, but just wanted to do a quick edit for you :)

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Today is a bad day.   Last night I stayed up late and woke up late in the this [you say this because you are speaking of the current] morning.  I was tired [implied that something made you tired]. because of something making me feel tired. Why can't things occur as I have imagined? Perhaps that will never occur. I hope that I can be strong--stronger...then I won't afraid of anything, right?

I wish I could be strong, then I won't feel sad. Today my credit card was swallowed by the cash machine and I couldn't go shopping or do something else to express my sadness. I'll just stayed at home, eating my more and more  ice cream one by one...

Today is really a bad day...
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today is a bad day...

Because last night stayed up late, I woke up late in the morning, because of something I feel tired, why can't things occur as I have imagined?Perhaps that will never occur, hope I can be strong, stronger...then I won't afraid of anything, right? I hope I coule be strong, then I won't feel sad.
Today my credit card was swallowed by the cash machine, I couldn't go shopping or do something else to express my sadness, just stay at home, eat ice cream one by one...
Today is really a bad day...

... felt tired. Why... then I won't be afraid...
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I couldn't... or do (better be anything)... 'stayed... and ate...' or 'could...'

Umm it was your day... good luck.

Today is a bad day...

Last night I stayed up late, woke up late in the morning because of something making me feel tired. Why can't things occur as I have imagined? Perhaps that will never occur. I hope that I can be strong, stronger...then I won't afraid of anything, right?

I wish I could be strong, then I won't feel sad. Today my credit card was swallowed by the cash machine and I couldn't go shopping or do something else to express my sadness. I'll just stay at home, eating my ice cream one by one...
Today is really a bad day...
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Not a perfect correction, but I decided to do this last second before i log out.. :P I feel as if "eating icecream one by one" should be changed, but nothing is popping up. >: \
I'm sorry about your day. :( At least you have icecream.