Wealth or health (ESSAY FCE) If you had to choose between being rich or being healthy, what would you prefer? I don´t have any doubts, I would choose to be healthy. It is true that if you are rich,

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Wealth or health (ESSAY FCE) If you had to choose between being rich or being healthy, what would you prefer? I don´t have any doubts, I would choose to be healthy. It is true that if you are rich, you are able to do whatever you want, even you could live without working. However, there are two things that you can´t buy with money: time and health. Both things are the truly wealth. From my view, you are able to enjoy your money as long as you feel fine. Therefore, we should take care of our health during our entire lives. However, most of the time we aren´t aware of this. For instance, when I was younger, I used to drink more alcohol at weekends than it was recommended. Thankfully, I grew up and I was aware that I had to change my habits, and I did it. Currently, I hardly ever drink alcohol and do sports every day. To sum up, our health is our most valuable treasure so we have to take care of it as much as we can.

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Wealth or health (ESSAY FCE)

If you had to choose between being rich or being healthy, what which would you prefer? I don't* have any doubts (better: Without a doubt), I would choose to be healthy.
It is true that if you are rich, you are able to do whatever you want, even you could even live without working. However, there are two things that you can't* buy with money: time and health. Both of these things are the true wealth.
From In my view, you are able to enjoy your money as long as you feel fine.
Therefore, we should take care of our health during for our entire lives. However, most of the time we aren't* aware of this. For instance, when I was younger, I used to drink more alcohol at weekends** than it was recommended. Thankfully, I grew up and I was aware realised that I had to change my habits, and I did it. Currently, I hardly ever drink alcohol and do play sports (better: exercise) every day.
To sum up, our health is our most valuable treasure (better: precious resource) so we have to take care of it as much as we can.

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* An apostrophe ( ' ) isn't the same character as a tilde without a letter ( ´ ). On a Spanish keyboard, the apostrophe is to the right of the 0 (zero) key.

** at weekends/at the weekend is correct in UK/European English, which is what the Cambridge First expects. In North American English, it's on weekends/on the weekend.

Wealth or health (ESSAY FCE)

If you had to choose between being rich or being healthy, what would you prefer? I don´t have any doubts, I would choose to be healthy.
It is true that if you are rich, you are able to do whatever you want, even you could live without working. However, there are two things that you can´t buy with money: time and health. Both things are the truly wealth.
In my opinion, you are able to enjoy your money as long as you feel fine.
Therefore, we should take care of our health during our entire lives. However, most of the time we aren´t aware of this. For instance, when I was younger, I used to drink more alcohol on weekends than it was recommended. Thankfully, I grew up and I was aware that I had to change my habits, and I did it. Currently, I hardly ever drink alcohol and do sports every day.
To sum up, our health is our most valuable treasure so we have to take care of it as much as we can.

Very well constructed and written.

Wealth or health (ESSAY FCE)

If you had to choose between being rich or being healthy, what would you prefer? I don´t have any doubts. I would choose to be healthy.
It is true that if you are rich, you are able to do whatever you want, you could even live without working. However, there are two things that you can´t buy with money: time and health. Both things are the true wealth.
From my view, you are able to enjoy your money as long as you feel fine.
Therefore, we should take care of our health during our entire lives. However, most of the time we aren´t aware of this. For instance, when I was younger, I used to drink more alcohol on weekends than it was recommended. Thankfully, I grew up and I was aware that I had to change my habits, and I did. Currently, I hardly ever drink alcohol and do sports every day.
To sum up, our health is our most valuable treasure so we have to take care of it as much as we can.

Lots of thanks Sean. I am studuying english really hard.I need to improve It as fast as I can.

Great job. Just a couple of tweaks, but you've obviously studied English for quite some time.

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