New Friend:)
Last week I went to the bar of gulou. To join a party.In there I know a gril from Russia.She is a pretty and Art gril,Study in BICT now. Learn Fashion design.Same like me.We talk about Fashion and where can buy material.
She like Chinese dress very much.In the end she invited me to see her art show.So We go anther place. there is a Italy woman open the bar.a middle-sized bar.There are often organizing shows.some about art some about video.... It's a good place.but no food:.( In that day have a new show.A man from France make a experimenpal films.It's so interesting and we like it.After that we go home.
I write so many word in this note...so proud of me:) and thank you for reading^^
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 4
0
:) thank you for your help!! lend me move fast （i mean“进步很快”)
我不仅爱吃饭 还爱做饭 :D I love eat and cooking
0
By the way ，我也爱吃饭 ！ :D
0
I'm sorry if i corrected the sentences that are already correct, i hope this helps, Your Note was amazing, Thankyou.
0
New Friend:)
Last week I went to the bar of GuLou, to join a party.From there I knew a girl from Russia.She is pretty and very good in art, she studies in BICT now. she learns Fashion Design same like me. We talk about Fashion and where could we buy the material for it.
She like Chinese dress very much.In the end she invited me to see her art show.So We wen to another place. There was an Italian woman who opens the middle-sized bar.They often organize shows. Some about art some about video.... It's a good place.but ther's no food :( .They have a new show that day .A man from France mad e a experimental films. It's so interesting and we like it. After that we went home.
I write so many words in this note...so proud of me:) and thank you for reading^^
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
