Today in morning
Today was a birthday of my friend. Two days ago she invited me on attractions in park. We have rided on roller coaster and many other attractions during 3 hours. And after all I felt sickness. My blood pressure felt, and my face was white. During today I feeling weakness
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Today in morning
Today is my friend's birthday. Two days ago, she invited me to an amusement park. We rode on roller coasters and enjoyed many other attractions for 3 hours, but afterwards, I felt sick. My blood pressure fell, and my face turned white. Now today, I feel weak.0
Oksana, your English is good. There are many ways to express your thought in English, and you did good. However, there were a couple of possessive, conjugation, and grammatical errors. Continue studying. REMEMBER: Repetition is the key to mastery!
P.S. I hope you feel better :)
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