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Fast food should never be sold to children Some people believe that fast food should never be sold to children. I do not fully agree with this statement, although I admit that fast food is a harmful food, and, of course, the basic diet of any person, both adults and children, should be normal food. Nevertheless, the child, in my opinion, should know all the joys of childhood. And how can you imagine childhood without a variety of goodies? Nevertheless, I understand the concern of children's nutritionists and parents who seek to restrict their children in harmful foods. Especially this problem is urgent now, when more and more "junk food" is produced, which is very harmful, contains a huge amount of fats and sugar. Especially dangerous is aggressive advertising in the media, which, for example, argues that breakfast cereals "Nesvik" is an absolutely healthy breakfast, which, of course, does not correspond to reality. As an inference, I can say that although fast food is certainly unhealthy food, it cannot just be forbidden selling it to children. It is much better to try to explain to the children their harm, so that the children understand the need for proper nutrition.

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Fast food should never be sold to children

Some people believe that fast food should never be sold to children.
I do not fully agree with this statement, although I admit that fast food is a harmful food, and, of course, that the basic diet of any person, both adults and children, should be normal food. Nevertheless, the child, in my opinion, in my opinion a child should know all the joys of childhood. And how can you imagine childhood without a variety of goodies?
Nevertheless, I understand the concern of children's child nutritionists and parents who seek to restrict their children in harmful foods restrict their children's access to harmful foods. Especially this problem is urgent now, Especially now, the problem is urgent, when as more and more "junk food" is produced, which is very harmful and contains a huge amount of fats and sugar. What is especially dangerous is the aggressive advertising in the media, which, for example, argues that breakfast cereals *"Nesvik" is an absolutely healthy breakfast, which, of course, does not correspond to reality. 
As an inference, In conclusion, I can say that although fast food is certainly an unhealthy food, it cannot just be forbidden selling to sell it to children. It is much better to try to explain to the children their harm, so that the children understand the need for proper nutrition.

*If "Nesvik" is the name of a specific cereal, you would say: argues that breakfast cereals like"Nesvik", are an absolutely healthy breakfast

*If "Nesvik" is the name of 'breakfast cereal' in another language you would say: argues that breakfast cereals ("Nesvik") are....

If "Nesvik" means something else, apologies.

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Fast food should never be sold to children

Some people believe that fast food should never be sold to children.
I do not fully agree with this view, although I admit that fast food does harm, and, of course, the basic diet of any person, both adults and children, should be normal food. Nevertheless, the child, in my opinion, should know all the joys of childhood. And can you imagine childhood without a variety of goodies?
Nevertheless, I understand the concern of child* nutritionists and parents who seek to restrict their children's bad eating. This problem is especially urgent now, when more and more "junk food" is produced, which is very harmful, contains huge amounts of fats and sugar. Especially dangerous is aggressive advertising in the media, which, for example, argues that breakfast cereals "Nesvik" is an absolutely healthy breakfast, which, of course, does not correspond to reality.
As an inference, I can say that although fast food is certainly unhealthy food, one should not simply forbid selling it to children. It is much better to try to explain to them the harm it causes, so that they understand the need for a proper diet.

*child doctors, child psychiatrists, etc

very well written!

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