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My first note Hi there! I'm newcomer here, I'm trying to introduce myself to you. My name is Julia, I was born in Moscow, Russia. I'm 34 years old. I love travel a lot, I have visited about 40 countries except Russia at present. I haven't goals to visit all the world , but some countries more attractive for me than others . For example, I'm keen on South America , I have visited Chile twice, Peru, Brazil, Argentina. And I would like to visit Colombia and Ecuador. So, I speak Spanish also.

But to tell the truth, I won't to visit Africa or Middle East countries, because of not my cup of tea..

Well, please, give me a comments bellow.

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My first note

Hi there! I'm a newcomer here, I'm trying to introduce myself to you. My name is Julia, I was born in Moscow, Russia. I'm 34 years old. I love travel a lot, I have visited about 40 countries so far/up until now except Russia at present. I don't want  haven't goals to visit all the world , but some countries are more attractive for me than others . I haven't goals to visit all the world , but some countries more attractive for me than others . For example, I'm keen on South America , I have visited Chile twice, Peru, Brazil, and Argentina. And I would like to visit Colombia and Ecuador. So, I also speak Spanish also.

But to tell the truth, I won't to visit Africa or the Middle East countries, because  they are of not my cup of tea..

Well, please, give me your  a comments bellow.

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My first note

Hi there! I'm a newcomer here. I'm trying to introduce myself to you. My name is Julia, I was born in Moscow, Russia. I'm 34 years old. I love travel a lot, I have visited about 40 countries excepting Russia at present. I do not want to visit everywhere , but some countries more attractive to me than others . For example, I'm keen on South America , I have visited Chile twice, Peru, Brazil, Argentina. And I would like to visit Colombia and Ecuador. So, I speak Spanish also.

But to tell the truth, I do not want to visit Africa or Middle East countries, because they are not my cup of tea..

Well, please, give me some comments below.

very well written!

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My first note

Hi there! I'm newcomer here, I'm trying to introduce myself to you. My name is Julia, I was born in Moscow, Russia. I'm 34 years old. I love to travel a lot, I have visited about 40 countries except Russia at present. I don't have goals to visit all the world, but some countries are more attractive to me than others. For example, I'm keen on South America , I have visited Chile twice, Peru, Brazil, Argentina. And I would like to visit Colombia and Ecuador. So, I speak Spanish also.

But to tell the truth, I won't visit Africa or Middle East countries, because of not my cup of tea...

Well, please, give me comments below.

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My first note

Hi there! I'm a newcomer here, I'm trying to introduce myself to you. My name is Julia, I was born in Moscow, Russia. I'm 34 years old. I love to travel a lot, I have visited about 40 countries except Russia at present. I haven't any wish to visit all the world, but some countries more attractive to me than others. For example, I'm keen on South America, I have visited Chile twice, Peru, Brazil and Argentina. I would like to visit Colombia and Ecuador. So, I speak Spanish also.

But to tell the truth, I won't be visiting Africa or Middle Eastern countries, because it's not my cup of tea.

please, give me your comments below.

very good some of your expression and grammar is not how a native would phrase things.

for a list of things you always leave out the last comma


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Thanks, guys, I'm going to think about that [emoji]

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