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The person I admire most. The person I admire most is my father. I have some reasons why I think this.

First, he is very kind and funny. Although he is tired after working, he always listens my story earnestly. Then, he gives me great advices and makes me happy by joking.

Second, he loves my mother and us children. On my parents' wedding anniversary every year, he presents beautiful flower to my mother.

For the reasons avobe, I respect my father a lot and I want to get married to a person like him.

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The person I admire the most.

The person who I admire the most is my father. I have some reasons why I think this/in such way.

Firstly, he is very kind and funny. Although he is tired after working, he always listens my story earnestly (better attentively). Then, he gives me great advices and makes me happy by joking.

Second, he loves my mother and his children. On my parents' wedding anniversary he every year presents beautiful flowers to my mother.

For the reasons above, I respect my father a lot and I want to get married to a person like him.


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