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我之后做什么呢? 七月我会完成了我的硕士,就需要决定我以后想做的是什么。我现在试图决定是否去意大利当经理。我知道那个工作很好,不过我也想去欧洲,因为好像比较探险。虽然我不老,我也不年轻了,所以我的想一想我的将来。有人说人生好像下棋所以必须想想好,想想慢。也有人说人生好像弹琴,如果我们不现抓的话,没有魔术。我还不知道我是什么种的人。。。

In July, I will finish my masters so I need to decide what I want to do afterwards. At the moment, I'm trying to decide whether I want to go to Italy to become a manager or not. I know it's a good job, but I also want to go to Asia because it seems like more of an adventure. Even though I'm not old, I'm not young anymore either so I should think about my future. There are some people who say that life is like chess and that you have to think a lot. There are other people who say that life is lile playing the piano and that if you mever improvise, there cant be any magic . I still don't know which type of person I am...

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1. 我之后做什么呢?(lacking modal verb such as "该" "应该" "要" "应当", which means "should")

我以后要做什么?

2. 七月我会完成了我的硕士,就需要决定我以后想做的是什么。("了" is used for perfect tense )

我会在七月完成我的硕士学位, 所以我得决定接下来想做什么. 

3. 我现在试图决定是否去意大利当经理。("试图" and "是否" are too formal)

眼下我正试着决定要不要去意大利当经理. 

4. 我知道那个工作很好,不过我也想去欧洲,因为好像比较探险。(wrong words. "探险" is a noun, not an adjective)

我知道那是个好工作, 不过我还想去亚洲, 那里似乎更像是个探险. 

5. 虽然我不老,我也不年轻了,所以我的想一想我的将来。(notice that "的", "得", "地" are homophones. )

虽然我年纪不算大, 也不小了, 所以我得想一想将来.

6. 有人说人生好像下棋所以必须想想好,想想慢。("所以" seems redundant when the logical connection is distinct.)

有人说人生就像下棋, 必须作一番思考. 

7. 也有人说人生好像弹琴,如果我们不现抓的话,没有魔术。

也有人说人生好像弹琴, 如果你不即兴弹奏, 就没有魅力. 

8. 我还不知道我是什么种的人。。。("什么"=what,)

我还不知道自己是哪种人.

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七月我会完成了我的硕士我即将硕士毕业,就需要决定我以后想做的是什么。我现在试图决定是否去意大利当经理。我知道那个工作很好,不过我也想去欧洲,因为好像比较探险。虽然我不老,但我也不年轻了,所以我的得想一想我的将来。有人说人生好像下棋,所以必须想想好,想想慢。也有人说人生好像弹琴,如果我们不现抓的话不抓住现在的话,没有魔术。我还不知道我是什么种的人。。。我也不知道我是什么样类型的人

In July, I will finish my masters so I need to decide what I want to do afterwards. At the moment, I'm trying to decide whether I want to go to Italy to become a manager or not. I know it's a good job, but I also want to go to Asia because it seems like more of an adventure. Even though I'm not old, I'm not young anymore either so I should think about my future. There are some people who say that life is like chess and that you have to think a lot. There are other people who say that life is lile playing the piano and that if you mever improvise, there cant be any magic . I still don't know which type of person I am...

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有人说人生好像下棋所以必须想想好,想想慢。.....我还不知道我是什么种的人。。。

好好想,慢慢想。

什么类型(种类 一般是指物体)

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你不是会说汉语和日语嘛,那还是到亚洲来吧,欢迎!:)
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Since so many people have corrected the little errors you have made I'm just going to try to give some advice [emoji] I have no idea how old you are, but no matter the age you should always seeks some sort of excitment in your life. Don't over think things and don't try to plan out your life. Go with the flow and let your heart guide you. At least that's how i prefer to live.

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