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my house I live in a shared house with 4 people from Asian countries. It has three-storey and my room is on upstairs. It's been almost 3 month since I moved. I'm getting on well with house mates but we don't see each other much at home as we have different time schedule.

My room is ensuite which has a bathroom so it's quite usuful, especially in a busy morning.

My house is in quiet residential area near middle sized park. When I commute to work, I always cross the park and go to the station. Besides, there is a huge shopping centre in my neighborhood so it's convinient to go shopping.

☆My sentences are pretty simple so I'd like to add more grammar as much I can.

That would be great if you had any idea.

Thank you!!!

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my house

I live in a shared house with 4 people from Asian countries. It has three-storiesey and my room is on upstairs. It's been almost 3 month since I moved. I'm getting on well along with my house mates, but we don't see each other much at home as since we have different time schedules.

My room is has an ensuite which has a bathroom, so it's quite usuful useful, especially in during a busy morning.

My house is in a quiet residential area near a middle sized park. When I commute to work, I always cross the park and go to the station. Beside my house/beside the park, there is a huge shopping centre in my neighborhood so it's convinient convenient to go shopping.

☆My sentences are pretty simple so I'd like to add more grammar as much I can.

That would be great if you had any idea.

Thank you!!!

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