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DailyTalki #17 - My routine today Hey, how is it going? I have busy lately. But today I'll write what happened to me. I will show you step-by-step to facilitate the reading: 1. I woke up 7:16 am. I walked around my home and played a bit with my cats. I have two cats and they always fight. I thought to donating them, but honestly I don't know how. They will be missed. 2. I wash my face wiping off the bogey and after I brush my teeth. 3. I dress and then hit the road with my bicycle. 4. I had forgotten to say so, but I left my notebook computer in my bag. 5. The road is longer. I'll take at least one hour to get to my destination. 6. It was more or less 9:45, 9:48 am and the day has just begun. I was so full of energy. I could do many things. 7. I turn on my notebook to study. I study only 30, 40 minutes. I decide to read and listen to an audiovisual book in English. After that, I study HTML5 because I'm interested to make a site starting from zero and see how the tools work to create a webpage. 8. At 5:15 pm I come back my home. 9. I write this note to you to rectify my mistakes. Please, give me one more chance to show what I'm capable of in English.

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DailyTalki #17 - My routine today

Hey, how is it going?

I have busy lately. But today I'll write what happened to me.

I will show you step-by-step to facilitate the reading:

1. I woke up 7:16 am. I walked around my home and played a bit with my cats. I have two cats and they always fight. I thought of donating them, but honestly I don't know how. They will be missed.

2. I wash my face wiping off the bogey and after I brush my teeth.

3. I dress and then hit the road with my bicycle.

4. I had forgotten to say so, but I left my notebook computer in my bag*.

5. The road is longer. I'll take at least one hour to get to my destination.

6. It was more or less 9:45, 9:48 am. and the day has just begun. I was so full of energy. I could do many things.

7. I turn on my notebook to study. I study only for 30, 40 minutes. I decide to read and listen to an audiovisual book in English. After that I study HTML5 because I'm interested to make a site starting from zero and see how the tools work to create a webpage.

8. At 5:15 pm I come back my home.

9. I write this note to you to rectify my mistakes.

Please, give me one more chance to show what I'm capable of in English.*

*if this was your meaning?

very well written!

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Edson, you should try to write this again, but using the past forms. You are writing about what happened to you, but you have written this note almost all in the present form.

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