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The mobile phone subscription of developed and developing country In the light of the above chart. the past nine years has witnessed the change of mobile-phone subscription in developed country and developing country. As is found above. the mobile-phone subscription of developed country has raised slowly. rising from close 0.5 billion in 2000 to 1 billion in 2008. In the meantime. there was a sharply increasing trend in the mobile-phone subscription of developing country. having jumped eightfold. up from less than 0.5 billion over the 9 years. Doubtlessly. the scene that people purchase mobile-phone in the developing country is widespread these day. Behind it. no contributing factors could be more sensible and feasible than the following two ones what cannot be overlooked is that developing country’s economy rising faster than developed country which have higher life conditions but less considerable changes. Besides. the happy indices of residents of developing country are increasing day by day. Many of them have a greater life than the past days and earn more money. which one could use it buying mobile-phone. Considering the above argument. a reliable and credible conclusion could be summarized as follows-the increasing mobile-phone subscription is the mark and requirement of economical globalization. a certain process of social and economic development. But that couldn’t be doubted is that the purchasing porver of residents\folks of developing country is becoming more and more powerful.

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The Mobile Phone Subscriptions of Developed and Developing Countries    [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]

In the light of the above chart, the past nine years has witnessed the change of mobile-phone subscriptions in developed countries and developing countries. As is found above, the mobile-phone subscriptions of developed countries has raised slowly, rising from close to 0.5 billion in 2000 to 1 billion in 2008. In the meantime, there was a sharply increasing trend in the mobile phone subscriptions of developing countries, having jumped eightfold, up from less than 0.5 billion over the 9 years.
Doubtlessly, the scene that people are purchasing mobile phones in the developing countries is widespread these days. Behind it, no contributing factors could be more sensible and feasible than the following two. What cannot be overlooked is that developing countries' economies are rising faster than developed countries which have higher life conditions but less considerable changes. Besides, the happiness indices of residents of developing countries are increasing day by day. Many of them have a greater life than in the past days and earn more money, which one could use buying a mobile-phone.
Considering the above argument. a reliable and credible conclusion could be summarized as follows: the increasing mobile phone subscriptions is the mark and requirement of economical globalization and a certain process of social and economic development. But what couldn’t be doubted is that the purchasing power of residents\folks of developing countries is becoming more and more powerful.

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