30 days challenge - your country's location.
Taiwan is in the Pacific Ocean,next to China.
It was the heart of Asia during world war II.
(I learn that in history class at junior high school)
What make Taiwan so special ?
During that time transportation is not convenient.
So they need checkpoint to help airplane refueling.
Not only transportation but also communication is not easy at that time.
Taiwan is a island around fish like tuna and mullet.
We have fishing port except the eastern part of Taiwan.
The southern of Taiwan has coral reef, and it's very beautiful protected as a national park.
The structure of Taiwan is different both east side to west side.
The western of Taiwan is sand shore,east side is rocky shore.
That's why the shape of Taiwan looks like a sweet potato.
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please let me know if there's anything wrong.thank you.
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30 days challenge - your country's location.
Taiwan is in the Pacific Ocean, next to China.It was the heart of Asia during World War II.
(I learned that in history class at junior high school.)
What makes Taiwan so special?
During that time transportation was not convenient.
So they needed a checkpoint to help *support* or *with* airplane refueling.
Not only transportation but also communication is was not easy at that time.
Taiwan is an island *where you can find a variety of* around fish like tuna and mullet.
We have a fishing port except for the east of Taiwan. - *are you saying there is a single fish port on to the east or many fishing ports in Taiwan, with the exception of to the east, where there are not any fishing ports*?
The southern *part* of Taiwan has a coral reef, and it's a very beautiful, protected as a national park.
The structure of Taiwan is different both east side to west side.
The western of Taiwan is sandy shore, *and* the east side is rocky shore. - maybe change the word from rocky to rough.
That's why the shape of Taiwan looks like a sweet potato.
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please let me know if there's anything wrong. thank you.
Hope these corrections help a bit. Very informative. :)
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