How do you typically celebrate New Year's?
I always go back to my parentes home from 30th December to 3rd January. I live far from my parents and we can only meet in these days. My parents and I drink alcohol together and talk a lot. We typically talk about what I did this year and I want to do next year. For example, I worked very hard such as coming home at 10 p.m. every day but I could enjoy my job. I'd like to start new things like I grow more. And my parents talk about their this year too. I'm always surprised because they are enjoying their second life, after I graduated college. My mother often go to concerts her favorite singer and my father start new hobbies like watching movies. I work hard and enjoy it, but after I retire, I want to be them. By the way, there are a lot of snows in my parents home city so it's difficult for me to go back there every year because trains and planes often stop because of snow. However, I feel last of year then. Snow always reminds me of my home city and I don't dislike it. Thank you.
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How do you typically celebrate New Year's?
I always go back to my parents' home from 30th December to 3rd January. I live far from my parents and we can only meet in these days during this time. (Better to write: When we meet, my parents and I...) My parents and I drink alcohol together and talk a lot. We typically talk about what I did this the previous year and I want to do next year. For example, last New Year's we talked about how I worked very so hard such as coming that I came home at 10 p.m. every day, and how I could still enjoy my job, and I'd like to start new things like I to grow more. And My parents talk would tell me about their this past year too. I'm always surprised because at how they are have been enjoying their second life, after since I graduated college. My mother often goes to concerts to see her favorite singer and my father has started new hobbies like watching movies. I work hard and enjoy it, but after I retire, I want to be like them. By the way, there are is a lot of snows in at my parents' home city so it's difficult for me to go back there every year because (You are using "because" a lot in the same sentence. Here you can also use: as) trains and planes often stop because of (Here, you could use: due to) snow. However, I feel last of year then the snow is what makes me feel like it's the end of the year. Snow always reminds me of my home city and I don't dislike it. Thank you.お正月は毎年楽しくお祝いしていますね！ちょっと文法だけ惜しいところがありますが。。。そこだけ気を付けてください。後"because"使って間違いではないけど、同じ意味の他の言い方も使った方が話がもっと面白くなります。これからも頑張ってください！
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