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The pictures illustrate how ketchup is made.
Overall there are 15 stages in the procedure , from picking tomatoes to ready product ,which consumers can eat it with hamburger.
First of all tomatoes are picked and put in basket. Before tomatoes are sent to factory they are sorted into two groups : bad and good. In the factory tomatoes are cleaned from the skin, stalk and seeds. Removed tomatoes are put into containers which has shape of cylinder . After being crushed tomatoes in the cylinder , to the tomatoes are added sugar , salt and vinegar . Mixed ingredients are boiled in the fire then left for two hours.
Our ketchup is ready for eat , but we should put it in plastic bottles. We give our special label , control its quality, put it into compact boxes and bring it to supermarkets. Costumers can buy it and gets peasure from delicious ketchup. Bon appètit.
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Hi everyone please check my essay before thanks
The pictures illustrates how ketchup is made.Overall there are 15 fifteen stages in the procedure, from picking tomatoes to ready the final product, which consumers can eat it with hamburgers.
First of all, tomatoes are picked and put in a basket. Before tomatoes are sent to the factory, they are sorted into two groups: bad and good. In the factory tomatoes are cleaned from the skin, stalk and seeds. Removed tomatoes are put into cylinder containers. which has shape of cylinder . After being crushed tomatoes in the cylinder , to the tomatoes are added sugar , salt and vinegar .Sugar, salt and vinegar are added after the tomatoes are crushed in the cylinder. Mixed ingredients are boiled in the fire then left for two hours.
Our ketchup is ready for eat, but we should put it in plastic bottles. We give our special label , control its quality, put it into compact boxes and bring it to supermarkets. Costumers can buy it and gets peasure get pleasure from our delicious ketchup. Bon appètit.
It is grammatically correct to spell out any number less than 100. In this sentence, "cylinder" is an adjective (A word that describes a noun or pronoun) so you put it before container. However, you could also word it "Removed tomatoes are put into containers, which have a cylinder shape. The word after is suggesting "later" so it sounds more natural to add that part of the sentence towards the end.
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