Could you help me with the following text?
Create a strong platform that running manly on mobile devices.
Build a huge accountant database.
Create an algorithm that will distribute the customer to specifics accountant who is going to ready to receive them.
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Could you help me with the following text?
Create a strong platform that runs mainly on mobile devices.Build a huge accounts (or accountancy) database.
Create an algorithm that will distribute the customers to a specific accountant who is going to will be ready to receive them.
I hope I have corrected this well. I'm not sure because you are writing about something specific and I don't know if you mean a database of accounts, or a database of accountants!
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Tks Daniel.
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Yes, that sentence sounds good!
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Tks Jordyn, if I write allocate, instead of direct in the following sentence: "Create an algorithm that will ALLOCATE the customer to a specific accountant who will be ready to assist them".
Does it sounds good and clear?
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"Create a strong platform that runs mainly on mobile devices. Build a huge accountant database. Create an algorithm that will direct the customer to a specific accountant who will be ready to assist them." Technically, you could use the word "receive" but I chose to put assist instead, because to me it sounds more clear. However, I think this is a matter of personal opinion.
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