My last holidays
On my last holiday I went to Huancayo, two years ago, with my Friends. We stayed three days in a Hotel. In the first day, we went go city tour and go to lagoon “Paca”.
In the second day we visited to “Convento de Ocopa”, in this place we saw artistic paintics, animal museum and natural beautiful places. At the night, we ate a local dish.
Finally, in the third day we went to “Huaytapallana”, the highest mountain of Huancayo. We could saw three lagoon in the way.
This experience was incredible because we walked more three hours to get to the last lagoon below the snowy. At the night we return to our Hotel, we were cold.
The Huancayo’s weather is cold and all days of holiday was cold, but I really liked those holiday.
Please, can someone correct the text above.
I await your comments
Thanks.
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My last holiday
On my last holiday, which was two years ago, I went to Huancayo with my friends. We stayed three days in a hotel. On the first day, we went on a city tour and to “Paca” lagoon.On the second day, we visited to “Convento de Ocopa”. At this location, we saw artistic paintings, an animal museum, and naturally beautiful places. At the night, we ate a local dish.
Finally, on the third day, we went to “Huaytapallana”, the highest mountain in Huancayo. We could see three lagoons along the way.
This experience was incredible because we walked more than three hours to get to the last lagoon below the snowy peak (?). At the night, we returned to our hotel, because we were cold.
The Huancayo’s weather is cold and every day of my holiday was cold, but I really liked the holiday.
Please, can someone correct the text above.
I await your comments.
Thanks.
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