An important achievement in life.
Next Wednesday, my oldest son must take his final exam to get an engineer degree. He is nervous, but he knows that this is the starting point in his professional career. He wants to work in the finance area, he likes numbers, he would also love to travel abroad to perfect his English. I remember that when he was a kid, he loved playing football. He dreamed of being a famous football player, but later, when he was a teenager, he thought it was better to be an engineer and changed his dreams.
Now he likes to play soccer with his friends, just to enjoy. Next Wednesday, maybe it's the most important game He've played so far, and I'm sure it will achieve it.
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An important achievement in life.
Next Wednesday, my oldest son must take his final exam to get an engineer degree. He is nervous, but he knows that this is the starting point in his professional career. He wants to work in the finance area, he likes numbers, and he would also love to travel abroad to perfect his English. I remember that when he was a kid, he loved playing football. He dreamed of being a famous football player., bBut later, when he was a teenager, he thought it was better to be an engineer and thus changed his dreams.Now he likes to play soccer with his friends, just to enjoy. Next Wednesday, maybe it's the most important game Hwe've played so far, and I'm sure it he will achieve it.
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An important achievement in life.
Next Wednesday, my oldest son must take his final exam to get an engineer degree. He is nervous, but he knows that this is the starting point in his professional career. He wants to work in the finance area, because he likes numbers,. hHe would also love to travel abroad to perfect his English. I remember that when he was a kid, he loved playing football. He dreamed (or dreamt) of beingbecoming a famous football player, but later, when he wasbecame a teenager, he thought it was better to be an engineer and changed his dreams.Now he likes to play soccer with his friends, just to enjoy for fun. Next Wednesday, maybe it's the most important game He've he has played so far, and I'm sure it will achieve it.
*You can say "He wants to work in finance" or "He wants to work in the field of finance"*
*"He wants to work in finance, he likes numbers" is an example of comma splice. This is a very common mistake (often made by native English speakers as well). You can read about that here: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/engagement/2/1/34/
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An important achievement in life.
Next Wednesday, my eldest son must take his final exam to get an engineering degree. He is nervous, but he knows that this is the starting point in his professional career. He wants to work in the finance area because he likes numbers, and he would also love to travel abroad to perfect his English. I remember that when he was a kid, he loved playing football. He dreamed of being a famous football player, but later, when he was a teenager, he thought it was better to be an engineer and changed his dreams.Now he likes to play soccer with his friends, just for enjoyment/for fun. Next Wednesday may be the most important game he's played so far, and I'm sure he will achieve it.
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Gracias Felipe
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one small comment.. in the end you wrote he've = he have.. remember.. he/she/it HAS
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