Please revise grammatical errors and incorrect words properly. I need your help.Thanks. YOU HAVE TO ARGUE YOUR OWN OPINION 1Grade 5Class Number15 Name Eun Ji Sim We are in a soiety where we live with many people. People have each of thoghts. opinion, view. And you too. This society have been composed of the public’s thought, opinion, view. What do you have your opinion? or Can your opinion reflect in a society? I want that you had better have and argue your own distinct opinion. If you don’t argue your own distinct opinion, you can’t do what you want. For instanse, when making a choice together, you might insist nothing. So you will be unsatisfied with other’s opinion. Eventually, you only be unhappy, excitied and unfulfilled in others. You may be taken advantage of somebody. cunning people wil increase around you. This situation is much more serious than when you can argue your own clear opinion. How do you argue your own opinion? First of all, you set your ‘distinct’ opinion. You have to know your opinion before you argue your opinion. If you don't know your opinion, you can't give a good reason. Third, you have infinit confidence. If you have much confidence, you think that your opinion is right. And you can speake loudly. Second, you have courage of hating. It isn’t bad of you to argue your opinion, If other people blame for you, they are far worse, when you argue your opinion to other people.