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My rant.
In this article I want to talk about what really annoys me. There’s one thing that really gets on my nerves: people who pollute the city. I live in Rome, I love my city and it makes me absolutely furious seeing people who spoil MY city. I don’t understand why people always do this. Italians are always clean: they take care of their own houses, they are obsessed with mopping the floor, dusting furniture and they consider important making a good impression when the guests come in their houses. However, when it comes to their city, they are completely selfish. They don’t care if they are spoiling that place, they only think to throw away the object that they don’t want to have anymore. It seems very odd to me that they don’t realize they live in the same place they are spoiling, so I don’t understand WHY doing this! There is a serviceable separate collection, but people carry on putting waste in the streets and despite all, they complain for the bad situation of the city and accuse the mayor for that.
I’m sure you agree that some people have to learn how to live in a community.
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Can you help me to correct this please?
My rant.In this article I want to talk about something that really annoys me. There’s one thing that really gets on my nerves: people who pollute the city. I live in Rome, I love my city and it makes me absolutely furious seeing people who spoil MY city. I don’t understand why people always do this. Italians are always clean: they take care of their own houses, they are obsessed with mopping the floor, dusting furniture and they consider it important to make a good impression when the guests come in their houses. However, when it comes to their city, they are completely selfish. They don’t care if they are spoiling the place. They only care about throwing away the object that they don’t want to have anymore. It seems very odd to me that they don’t realize they live in the same place they are spoiling, so I don’t understand WHY they are doing this! There are trash bins to recycle waste, but people carry on putting waste in the streets despite all and to make things worse, they complain about the bad state of the city and blame the mayor for it.
I’m sure you agree that some people have to learn how to live in a community.
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Thank you Richard for your advice!!
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Hello claudia, that is a very valid meaningful and well written statement you wrote there, and I totally understand how you feel about people caring about the environment they live in.
One small tip though. After four five, or six lines? Maybe you could break the sentences up with a new paragraph. It helped me over the years with essays and letter writing.
If, at any time you need to go back and look at written statements, essays and letters and pick out certain sentences for references. It is much easier for you to do so.
I hope I have been of some help to you. I wish you all the best in your future studies, and please message me any time if you need any help.
Kind regards,
Richard
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Can you help me to correct it please?
My rant.In this article I want to talk about what really annoys me. There’s one thing that really gets on my nerves: people who pollute the city. I live in Rome, I love my city and it makes me absolutely furious seeing people who spoil MY city. I don’t understand why people always do this. Italians are always clean: they take care of their own houses, they are obsessed with mopping the floor, dusting furniture and they consider important making a good impression important when the guests come in their houses. However, when it comes to their city, they are completely selfish. They don’t care if they are spoiling that this place, they only think to about throw throwing away the object that they don’t want to have anymore. It seems very odd to me that they don’t realize they live in the same place they are spoiling, so I don’t understand WHY doing do this! There is a serviceable separate collection, but people carry on putting waste in the streets and despite it all, they complain for about the bad situation of in the city and accuse blame the mayor for that.
I’m sure you agree that some people have to learn how to live in a community.
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