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007 : Hello New zealand I am living here about 3 mounts. There are several feeling like a excite, happy and weird. First time I have a goal to live abroad somewhere. Finally, I decide to choose to come to New Zealand because I want to improve my English language, have new experience and out of my comfort zone. Firstly, I think this country have more technology. Many shops use eftpos instead cash. They also have hop card. I can use hop card to travel by many transportation like a bus, train and ferry. Furthermore, I felt in love with people here. I alway met nice people and I like moments that people spent times with their pets. It’s so lovely. Especially, people here have more responsibility for example the owner always kept pet’s poo to a bin. That’s the things need to do. The last things is safety. I felt comfortable when I across the street. Even through this country have a lot of advantage. The problem to me is the weather. There are changing. I can not predict and need to bring an umbrella all the time. Lastly, the most important thing that I don’t like is the cost of living is very hight. Thank you guys for correct my essay.

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007 : Hello New zealand

I have been living here for about 3 months. I have felt excited, happy and weird. This is the  first time I have had a goal to live abroad somewhere. Finally, I decided to come to New Zealand because I wanted to improve my English, have new experience and get out of my comfort zone.

Firstly, I think this country has more technology. Many shops use eftpos instead of cash. They also have the 'hop' card. I can use the hop card to travel by the different transportation types, like a bus, train and ferry. Furthermore, I fell in love with people here. I always meet nice people and I like the moments that people spend with their pets. It’s so lovely. I especially like how people here take more responsibility, for example the owner always puts the pet’s poo in a bin. This is things people need to do. The last things is safety. I feel more comfortable when I cross the street.

Even through this country has many advantages, the problem for me is the weather. It's always changing. I can not predict it and I need to take an umbrella with me all the time. Lastly, the most important thing that I don’t like is the cost of living is very high.

Thank you guys for correct my essay.

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