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Wedding day Hello Everyone I want to share with you my daily feelings and try to write something of interesting that help me to improve my English write too. My wedding day is coming on in a week and I am starting to be a little bit worried and nervous. My fiancee and I are ready for the cerimony and happy to do this important step of our life. Everything is ready and after the cerimony we will celebrate the event with a big party with friends and relatives where we will have a lot of fun I hope. Thanks for any corrections best wishes

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Wedding day

Hello Everyone

I want to share with you my daily feelings and try to write something of interesting interest that will help me to improve my English write writing too.

1/ You can say "something interesting" or "something of interest", but you can't mix them together. 2/ Writing is the activity that you want to improve. When you want to practice something, it's usually in the gerund form. (That is, ending in -ing.)

"I want to improve my running".

"I am taking an advanced driving course."

(There are exceptions.)

My wedding day is coming on up in a week and I am starting to be a little bit worried and nervous.

Auguri.

A period of time is always "coming up", not "coming on".

"I have three exams coming up."

"My holidays are coming up in a month."

My fiancee and I are ready for the cerimony ceremony and happy to do take this important step of our life lives.

1/ In Italian, "fare" is an all purpose verb. However it translates to several different verbs in English. In English you normally "take a step" rather than "doing a step". 2/ "of our lives" is OK, but "in our lives" is probably more common here. 3/ Even after you get married you will still have two lives (plural), not one life (singular).

Everything is ready and after the cerimony ceremony we will celebrate the event with a big party with friends and relatives where we will have a lot of fun I hope.

Thanks for any corrections

best wishes

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Wedding day

Hello Everyone

I want to share with you my daily feelings and try to write something of interesting that will help me to improve my English write writing too.

My wedding day is coming on up in a week and I am starting to be get a little bit worried and nervous. My fiancee and I are ready for the cerimony ceremony and happy to do make this important step of our life in our lives.

Everything is ready and after the  cerimony ceremony we will celebrate the event with a big party with friends and relatives where we will have a lot of fun I hope.

Thanks for any corrections

best wishes
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