I love my sorrows
Some sorrow make to weeping. Some sorrow train up to be a selfish. Some sorrow burn in chest just like a fire of husk. Perhaps some sorrow keep my heart wet....but i love that sorrow which teach me how to walk on a rocking path and which is ended by a happy conclusion.
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I Love My Sorrows
Some sorrow causes weeping. Some sorrow trains us to be selfish. Some sorrow burns in the chest like a fire of husk. Perhaps some sorrow keeps the heart wet, but I love the sorrow which teaches me how to walk on a rocking path and which leads to a happy conclusion.What does it mean to "keep the heart wet"?
What does it mean to "walk on a rocking path"?
These are metaphors that I have never heard in English. Maybe you could express those thoughts in different words? I would suggest some, but since I'm not sure what the metaphors mean, I really don't know how you could say them better.
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I love my sorrows
Some sorrow leads to weeping. Some sorrow train us up to be selfish. Some sorrow burns in the chest just like a fire of husk. Perhaps some sorrow keeps my heart wet....but i love that sorrow which teaches me how to walk on a rocking path and which leads to a happy conclusion.Want to progress faster?
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