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Crazy morning !
This is just from my imagination, thank you for reading !Today I waked woke up at 6 am as usually, washed myself washed my face, changed my clothes and took grabbed my breakfast.
I saw that I had more time left; it was 7 am and I work only at 8 am so and I only have needed to reach the bus station at 7:30 am.
So I opened my tv to see watch the news. Suddenly I saw the time on the tv. It was 8 am!! yes I forgot that it's the first day for the changing of the "time change"!!
I jumped from my chair and ran away towards the station. I can't couldn't believe this: I'm already late.
Waiting in the station, it started raining. I was wet all over and should go come back to home in order to change my clothes.
Leaving the station, I saw the bus coming and the next one is after one hour later: my day is has gone !
(sorry for my english)
(When you get a chance, check out "comma splices". They're mistakes that are easy to fix once you recognize them. Basically, it's when a sentence and a fragment (or two sentences) are jammed together with a comma rather than being connected with a conjunction (and, but, or). Another way to solve a "comma splice" is by making two full sentences. See below:
I went to the store, it was cold outside. (Wrong. Comma Splice.)
I went to the store. It was cold outside. (Right. Two full sentences)
I went to the store and it was cold outside. (Right. Uses "and" as a conjunction.)
I went to the store, but it was cold outside. (Right. Uses "but" as a conjunction.))
Happy Writing! ;)
Today I woke up at 6 am as usually, washed myself, changed my clothes and ate/had breakfast.
I saw that I had time left, it's 7 am and I work at 8 am, so I have to reach the bus station at 7:30 am.
So I opened my tv to see the news. Suddenly I saw the time on the tv, it was 8 am!! yes I forgot that it's the first day of time change !!
I jumped from my chair and ran towards the station, I can't believe this, I'm already late.
Waiting in the station, it started raining, I was wet all over and should go home in order to change my clothes.
Leaving the station I saw the bus coming and the next one is after one hour: my day has gone
(sorry for my english)
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This is just from my imagination, thank you for reading ! Today I waked up at 6 am as usually usual, washed myself, changed my clothes and took my eat breakfast. I saw that I had more much time left, it's 7 am and I work only at 8 am, I have need to reach the bus station at 7:30 am. So I opened turned on my tv to see the news. Suddenly I saw the time on the tv, it was 8 am!! yes I forgot that it's the first day for the changing of the time time changes !! I jumped from out of my chair and ran away towards the station, I can't couldn't believe this, that I'm already late. Waiting in the station, it started raining, I was wet all over and should come back to home in order to change my clothes. Leaving the station I saw the bus coming and the next one is after one hour: my day has gone ! (sorry for my english)
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