My Diary 5/10
I had few lunch so I was hungry in this afternoon. I cooked pasta for dinner. I thawing tomato sauce added fish and shimeji mushrooms. And I made soup that I mashed broccoli stalk . It was not good but economy.
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My Diary 5/10
I had few a small lunch so I was hungry in this afternoon. I cooked pasta for dinner: I thawed tomato sauce, then added fish and shimeji mushrooms. And I made soup that I from mashed broccoli stalk. It was not good but it was economical (you could also say 'It was not good but it was cheap).0
My Diary 5/10
I had few only a small (ALSO: "I only had a small..") lunch so I was hungry in by this ("this" here isn't really needed) afternoon. I cooked pasta for dinner. I thawing thawed (can optionally use "some" here) tomato sauce, (you list 3 or more items so need a comma here) added fish, (this comma at the end of your list is optional) and shimeji mushrooms. And (ALSO: "Then" instead of "And") I made soup [using / with / from] that I mashed broccoli stalk that I mashed . It was not (this would sound a little more natural if you used "It wasn't very") good but economy (here you don't need a verb but if you choose you could use "was" or "it was") economical ("economy" is a noun, you want an adjective here. "economic" has to to with the economy ie. the economy of a nation. "economical" means good value or not using a lot of money).0
My Diary 5/10
I had few a small lunch so I was hungry in this afternoon. I cooked pasta for dinner. I thawed tomato sauce added fish and shimeji mushrooms. And I made soup that I using mashed broccoli stalk . It was not good but it was economic.Want to progress faster?
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