Few sentences. Hello, could you check these sentences, are they correct? First of all, she covered up from him that she has been cheating him on for a while. She clashed at the opportunity to get m

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Few sentences. Hello, could you check these sentences, are they correct? First of all, she covered up from him that she has been cheating him on for a while. She clashed at the opportunity to get married to a German acquaintance. She cast away her mother, husband, cat and old friends and get married to German. He just brushed she off, when she told about a problem. Thanks in advance.

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First of all, she covered up the fact that she had been cheating on him for a while. She jumped at the opportunity to get married to a German acquaintance. She cast away her mother, husband, cat and old friends and got married to the German. He just brushed her off, when she told him about a problem.

Hello Felix!

I've made a few alterations...Hope you find them useful.

I'm not exactly sure what you wanted to say in the second sentence - the word "clashed", usually implies some kind of conflict, e.g. two people may clash when they have a difference of opinion. I think "jumped" might be the word you are looking for here - meaning that she took the opportunity enthusiastically.

The last sentence is grammatical - but its meaning is slightly unclear - do you mean that the German man abandoned her when she told him about a problem that she has? If you have already mentioned the problem in an earlier paragraph not included here, it might be better to say "her" problem, or "the" problem.

All the best,

Shae

A Few sentences.

Hello,
could you check these sentences, are they correct?

First of all, she covered up from him the fact that she had been cheating on him _ for a while. She clashed jumped at the opportunity to get married to a German acquaintance. She cast her mother, husband, cat and old friends away and got married to German. He just brushed her off, when she told him about a problem.

Thanks in advance.

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