Hey Layza, here are my corrections :-)

My experience in ITalki

Here are the mistakes (in red)

My experience in ITalki

Here is the entry again, but with corrections added and written a bit more naturally :)

My experience on iTalki

I've been using the app for two days. During that time, I wrote two notebooks about random things. I met some very cool people and overcame my fear of speaking to foreigners.

I'm so happy with my progress. It's a broken hurdle for me, I know. I'm writing all wrong, but I know it's a process...

For now, thanks for your attention and correction.

Welcome to iTalki, by the way! All the best with your studies!

My experience in italki

There is nothing like make mistakes to learn. I cleaned up your story a little, but your style is interesting. With time and perseverance, you'll make fewer errors. Keep writing, but before you post it, read it out loud to your self. If it sounds bad, corrected it. If it sounds good, post it and we'll be happy to ready your story. But if one thing is important, don't quit, write, write, write...

Gil in sunny Canada

My experience on ITalki

Very well written!