I need help!!!!

I am going to an English class tomorrow and I need to present myself in English.
Can someone correct this text for me?
Hello! My name is Anna, I am 22 years old, I am from Guarapuava-PR, but I am currently living here in Aparecida de Goiânia. I am a very shy person, and I don't really like to talk to very much.
My hobby is to reading books, but I just only like to read in English. When I am reading a book I feel like I am traveling to a new world. I usually read on the bus going to work and before I go to sleep.
My dream is to live in the United States. I plan to realize this dream in over the next 10 years because I need to save money, I need to get graduated in with a degree for a good profession and so on. I want to live there because I love their culture, their musics, their flag, their movies... I love everything about them.
I don't feel so very comfortable in this country. (Be prepared to answer questions about why you don't feel very comfortable in the country you live in.)

I am going to a English class and I need to present myself in English tomorrow. Can someone correct this text to me? Hello! My name is Anna, I am 22 years old, I am from Guarapuava-PR, but I am currently living here in Aparecida de Goiânia. I am a very shy person, and I don't really like to talk too much. My hobby is reading, but I just like to read in English. When I am reading a book I feel like I am traveling to a new world. I usually read on the bus going to work and before I go to sleep. My dream is to live in United States, and I plan to realize this dream in over more or less 10 years because I need to save money, I need to get graduate in a good profession and so on. I want to live there because I love their culture, their musics, their flag, their movies... I love everything about them I don't feel so comfortable in this country.

I am going to an English class and I need to present myself in English tomorrow.
Can someone correct this text to me?
Hello! My name is Anna, I am 22 years old, I am from Guarapuava-PR, but I am currently living here in Aparecida de Goiânia. I am a very shy person, I don't really like to talk too much.
Reading is my hobby, but I only like reading English books . When I read a book I feel that I am traveling to a new world. I usually read at the bus while going to work and before I go to sleep.
My dream is living in United States, I have planned  to achieve this dream more than 10 years later because I need to save money, I need to get graduated with a good profession and so on. I want to live there because I love their culture, their musics, their flag, their movies... I love everything about them 
I am not feeling so comfortable in this country.