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Essay "Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on peoples's lives. Do you agree? Fashion industry does not a bad effect on peoples' lives. It is possible to say because these industry is so important in society, In fact appearance of people are important. For instance, when people go to a interview for a job, it is necessary to show a satisfactory appeareance, so that to have a good result. In every occasions people are judge in the first time about their appearance. The prices of clothes can be cheap or expensive, depends on how much to intend spending. There are many brands that make cheap clothes with a regular or good qualite. In the other hand there are some brands that have clothes expensive but not much, and it has brands with expensive prices of clothes, that are for a select group. In conclusion, fashion industry has a good effect on people'lives. They can criate good behaviour in society. Many people working in fashion industry so as to the consumers are satisfied.

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Hola! Perdona, cómo has hecho para que te dejará subir el texto? Yo escribí uno de unas 700 palabras y no me dejó. Me decía que sólo entre 50-100. Gracias!

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