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Getting Married Getting married gives us a best supporter.Many people are of the opinion that it is better to marry late rather than early,mainly because it costs a lot of money to get married.However,it is my strong opinion that to marry early is much better than to marry late.Firstly,people who marry early are young enough to play with their children,so they can make their children active by playing with them outdoors.In particular,when their children are young,parents need to take them to different places and play with them.Furthermore,people who marry while they’re still young are likely to have many children.As a result,it may halt the declining birthrate.All in all,for the above reasons,there is no doubt that getting married early is the best thing to do.

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It also depends on whether you find your partner at that age or not.
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Getting Married

Getting married gives us the best supporter. Many people are of the opinion that it is better to marry late rather than early, mainly because it costs a lot of money to get married. However, it is my strong opinion that to marry early is much better than to marry late. First of all, people who marry early are young enough to play with their children, so they can make their children active by playing with them outdoors. In particular, when their children are young, parents need to take them to different places and play with them. Furthermore, people who marry while they’re still young are likely to have many children. As a result, it may halt the declining birthrate. All in all, for the reasons stated above, there is no doubt that getting married early is the best thing to do.


yellow color - definitely a mistake

green color - suggestion how you can say this better

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In my opinion,〝early “ is about ~25.
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Which age is called " early " and " late " here in your opinion ?

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