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Are You a Fear-Based Person? “All the gods, all the heavens, all the hells, are within you” “The chains of habit are too weak to be felt until they are too strong to be broken” When you put these two quotes together it is transformative. I do not know if there is heaven or hell when we die. I will leave that to the spiritual experts. I am not one of them, but I will tell you, and I am sure you can agree. There is heaven and hell on Earth. Heaven, What is it? It is when the chains of habit reinforce what we really want to do, what our true destiny is. Hell is when our habits oppose what we know we should be doing. This is hell on Earth, to live at half capacity? What else could be hell? Injury? You can recover from an injury. Loss of Money? Bankruptcy? They might hit you. The average millionaire has been bankrupt twice, but you know what, they recover. But hell on earth is the time that you have lost because all the money in the world and all the wishing in the world will never get you back that time. All the heavens and all the hells are inside of you. They are there because when we grew up society imposed its will on us, they call that social controls. Maybe your parents did not do the job they could have done because they did not know any better. The traumas of life. The new you, what is the new you? The new you strangely is probably the old you before society drop odds on your brain, before the education system imposed its will and kicked all the curiosity out of you and then society started telling you to shut up, before life kicked in and mother nature imposed fear. The habits of the mind begin to form. Fear becomes the dominant force in your life. The next thing you do you procrastinate, maybe the habit of the brain says what if people laugh at you ? Social control, or it says maybe what happens if you go broke? Economic pressure. Maybe it is overanalyzing, so you become paralyzed, because you got too many options, paradox of choice, by the time you realize you are a fear-based person, by the time you realize you procrastinate a lot you are beginning to create hell on Earth. However, you can fix it if you understand the transformational power of the mind, you can change your destiny, all changes happen instantly even though it takes a while to show up, if you master the habits of the mind then the chains will fall off and once the chains falls off suddenly the things that you have been dreaming of you begin to do that is heaven on Earth.

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Are You a Fear-Based Person?

“All the gods, all the heavens, all the hells, are within you.”
“The chains of habit are too weak to be felt until they are too strong to be broken.”
When you put these two quotes together it is transformative. I do not know if there is heaven or hell when we die. I will leave that to the spiritual experts. I am not one of them, but I will tell you, and I am sure you can agree: there is heaven and hell on Earth. Heaven, what is it? It is when the chains of habit reinforce what we really want to do, what our true destiny is. Hell is when our habits oppose what we know we should be doing. This is hell on Earth, to live at half capacity? What else could be hell? Injury? You can recover from an injury. Loss of Money? Bankruptcy? They might hit you. The average millionaire has been bankrupt twice, but you know what, they recover. But hell on earth is the time that you have lost because all the money in the world and all the wishing in the world will never get you back that time. All the heavens and all the hells are inside of you. They are there because when we grew up, society imposed its will on us, they call that social controls. Maybe your parents did not do the job they could have done because they did not know any better. The traumas of life. The new you, what is the new you? The new you strangely is probably the old you before society drop odds on your brain, before the education system imposed its will and kicked all the curiosity out of you and then society started telling you to shut up, before life kicked in and mother nature imposed fear. The habits of the mind begin to form. Fear becomes the dominant force in your life. The next thing you do you procrastinate, maybe the habit of the brain says what if people laugh at you ? Social control, or it says maybe what happens if you go broke? Economic pressure. Maybe it is overanalyzing, so you become paralyzed, because you've got too many options, paradox of choice. By the time you realize, you are a fear-based person, by the time you realize you procrastinate a lot; you are beginning to create hell on Earth. However, you can fix it if you understand the transformational power of the mind, you can change your destiny. All changes happen instantly even though it takes a while to show up, if you master the habits of the mind then the chains will fall off, and once the chains falls off, suddenly the things that you have been dreaming of you begin to do that is heaven on Earth.

Excellent! Apart from a few periods here and there I feel that everything is perfect. Great language skills! I would recommend dividing your text in two or three paragraphs as it will be easier to read that way. I don't know, stress, anxiety, depression, hopelessness can all be very painful states of mind. I do believe that emotional pain is much more severe than physical pain. Frustration can also be quite painful as well, which I think is what you're getting at. Although I do believe in hell after death, a place much more horrible than anything a human being can experience in this world. I think that defeatism is the most painful thing a human being can experience in this world, to lose all hope and to despair. Nothing worse than that.



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