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Personal Statement When I was a freshman, my head teacher told me that we should reproduce sewage and remove dust to show a more beautiful wold, which may be the goal of everyone who is major in environmental engineering. I choose environmental engineering as a major is a coincidence, but studying and working in the field about ecological environment is my plan of the future. It is my ideal to recreate the past beautiful scenery by dedicating to the treatment of pollution and the protection of the ecological environment. The school motto of Zhengzhou University is “to be firmly believed and benevolent, and to be deliberative and diligent”. It has always been regarded as the quality that today's college students should have. I also constantly remind myself by it. I just try to be firm and unyielding and to go on step by step towards my goal. "I don't considerate whether I can succeed. Since I chose to go far, I only care about the wind and rain." This has always been my belief.

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Personal Statement

When I was a freshman, my head teacher told me that we should reproduce sewage and remove dust to show a more beautiful wold, which may be the goal of everyone who is major in environmental engineering. I choose environmental engineering as a major is a coincidence, but studying and working in the field about ecological environment is my plan of the future. It is my ideal to recreate the past beautiful scenery by dedicating to the treatment of pollution and the protection of the ecological environment.
The school motto of Zhengzhou University is “to be firmly believed and benevolent, and to be deliberative and diligent”. It has always been regarded as the quality that today's college students should have. I also constantly remind myself by it. I just try to be firm and unyielding and to go on step by step towards my goal. "I don't considerate whether I can succeed. Since I chose to go far, I only care about the wind and rain." This has always been my belief.


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