Avengers Infinity War (Spoiler Alert)
Yesterday, my boyfriend and I went to the movies to watch the avengers movie. It was a sold out, so we had to be in the first line, it wasn't so good because the big screen seemed weird, but anyway we wanted to watch the movie.
My favorite character in that movie was Loki, guess who started crying in the very beginning? Thannos killed him! The rest of the movie was good, it was a lot of action scenes, blood everywhere, just like you could imagine. I didn't care much to the rest of the plot, because Loki, my love was already dead. So if you want to know what else happened in the movie, just google it and you can find a lot of spoilers there.
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Avengers Infinity War (Spoiler Alert)
Yesterday, my boyfriend and I went to the movies theater[1] to watch the avengers movie. It was a sold out, so we had to be in the first line row,. It wasn't so good because the big screen seemed weird, but anyway we wanted to watch the movie[2].My favorite character in that movie was Loki— guess who started crying in the very beginning? Thannos killed him! The rest of the movie was good:, it was a lot of action scenes, blood everywhere, just like you could imagine. I didn't care much for to the rest of the plot, because Loki, my love, was already dead. So if you want to know what else happened in the movie, just google it, and you can find a lot of spoilers there.
[1] “Going to the movies” is correct, and a natural, more informal way, to say “going to the theater”. But it sounds redundant when you follow with “to watch the avengers movie”.
[2] This is fine, but could be more specific if you wanted: “It wasn’t as comfortable because the screen was too close, but we wanted to watch the movie.”
I’m really impressed with your proficiency. My remarks (1 & 2) are my opinions only. Very nice work!
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Yesterday, my boyfriend and I went to the movies to watched the avengers movie. It was a sold out, so we had to be in the first line sit in the first row, it wasn't so good because the big screen seemed weird, but anyway we wanted to watch the movie. My favorite character in that movie was Loki, guess who what started me crying in the very beginning? Thannos killed him! The rest of the movie was good, it was a lot of action scenes, blood everywhere, just like what you could would imagine. I didn't care much to about the rest of the plot movie, because Loki, my love was already dead my heart has stopped beating the moment Loki died in the movie. So if you want to know what else happened in the movie, just google it and you can find a lot of spoilers there.
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