My pet
Yesterday it was my cat´s birthday. She is twelve years old and I love her as a member more of my family.
So many people don´t understand me when I say that, but Jovi (my cat) lives with me from she was three weeks of live and she always is by my side when I am happy or sad.
Jovi is a very special cat because sometimes it sames as a dog. She is waiting for me at the door of the house when I arrive from work at night, she is very lovely, she doesn´t broke the furniture and curtains and she needs only a few thing to be happy: some food, some clean water and the sun. She is fortunate because we live in a sunny city and she can be lying down taking sun almost every day.
Jovi was abandoned. She was in a garbage container. She was hungry and very thin. I have not sure if she would be live but she did it and now, twelve years ago is a healthy pet.
The only problem is that my boyfriend is very alergic to her and she falls a lot of hair but I hope to be the ocassion to spend more years with her.
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My pet
Yesterday was my cat´s birthday. She is now twelve years old and I love her more as a member of my family.So many people don´t understand me when I say that, but Jovi, her name, has lived with me from she was three weeks old and she always is by my side when I am happy or sad.
Jovi is a very special cat because sometimes she resembles a dog. She waits for me at the front door when I come home from work at night. She is very lovely, she doesn´t break the furniture and curtains and she needs only a few things to be happy: some food, some clean water and the sun. She is fortunate because we live in a sunny city and she can lie down taking the sun almost every day.
Jovi was abandoned. She was in a garbage container. She was hungry and very thin. I was not sure if she would live but she did and now, twelve years later, she is a healthy pet.
The only problem is that my boyfriend is very allergic to her and she moults but I hope to be lucky to spend many more years with her.
Very well written!
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My pet
Yesterday it was my cat´s birthday. She is twelve years old and I love her as a member more of my family.So many people don´t understand me when I say that, but Jovi (my cat) has been living with me from since she was three weeks old of live and she is always is by my side when I am happy or sad.
Jovi is a very special cat because sometimes she acts like the sames as a dog. She is waits for me at the door of the house when I arrive home from work at night, she is very loving, she doesn´t break the furniture and curtains and she needs only a few things to be happy: some food, some clean water, and the sun. She is fortunate because we live in a sunny city and she can be lie in down taking the sun almost every day.
Jovi was abandoned. She was found in a garbage container. She was hungry and very thin. I have not sure if she would survive be live but she did it and now, twelve years later ago is a healthy pet.
The only problem is that my boyfriend is very allergic to her and she falls sheds a lot of hair but I hope to be the ocassion to spend many more years with her.
Well done Judit.
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My Pet
Yesterday was my cat´s birthday. She is twelve years old and I love her as a member of my family.So many people don´t understand me when I say that, but Jovi (my cat) has lived with me since she was three weeks old. She is always by my side when I am happy or sad.
Jovi is a very special cat because sometimes she's like a dog. She waits for me at the door of the house when I arrive from work at night. She is very lovely. She doesn't break the furniture and curtains. She only needs a few things to be happy: some food, some clean water and some sunlight. She is fortunate because we live in a sunny city and she can lie down under the sun almost every day.
Jovi was abandoned. She was in a garbage container. She was hungry and very thin. I was not sure if she could live but she did it and now, twelve years has passed and she is a healthy pet.
The only problem is that my boyfriend is very allergic to my cat because she falls a lot of hair. I hope to spend more years with her.
Lucky Jovi, you have found her. :)
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