Ok,i designed to go back to sleep [emoji][emoji][emoji]
4/30 diary
I woke up at 5:00 am by the sound of my father opening his door. He always wakes up at 7:00am. So when I heard this sound, I thought "Its 7:00am now." I was very nervous. So I started to prepare to go to work. Suddenly, I noticed the sky was dark and the sun had not risen . What time actually is it? I asked myself , "Is it 5:00am??????" Okay, then I decided to go back to sleep.
4/30 diary
I work up at 5:00am by to the sound that of my father opened opening his door. He always woke wakes up at 7:00, so ...when I heard this sound, I tougt knew it was 7:00 then, and I was very nervous. So I started to prepare get ready to go to work when suddenly I noticed that the sky was still dark and the sun haven't hadn't even risen yet... "what's time is it, actually?" I asked myself, 5??????Ok, then I designed decided to go back to sleep [emoji][emoji][emoji]
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Such a great entry! This reminded me of the time my friend pranked me during a sleepover hahahaha.
Afterwards, i decided to go back to sleep [emoji][emoji][emoji]
Ok, I decided to go back to sleep. [emoji][emoji][emoji]
4/30 diary
I woke up at 5:00 am by the sound that my father opening his door. He always wakes up at 7:00, so when i heard this sound, i thought "its 7:00 now." I was very nervous so i started to prepare to go to work. Suddenly i noticed that the sky was dark and that the sun hasn't risen ...."what's is it actually?", I asked my self ,"5??????"Ok, I decided to go back to sleep [emoji][emoji][emoji]
I made a few corrections, but its great that you're practicing in English. The paragraph for the most part made sense and was coherent.
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