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Self intro? 我的名字是Alex。我是学生,我学习中文,生意, 电脑编程。我是匈牙利人,我住在日本。我的朋友是中国人,她也住在日本和她是英文在说很好。

我喜欢电脑游戏,电影,我的蛇和中国菜。

我每天学习10-20个汉字。

I'm studying 中文 on my own in my spare time and I'm in the very beginning stages(halfway through hsk1)

Does the above text make sense? Are there any grammar mistakes? Could I improve on it without exceeding my current language level too much?

谢谢[emoji][emoji]

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Self intro?

我的名字是Alex。我是学生,我学习中文,貿易和电脑编程。我是匈牙利人,目前我住在日本。我的朋友是中国人,她也住在日本並且她是英文说的很好。

我喜欢玩电脑游戏,看电影,我的蛇和中国菜。我還養了一條蛇,我很喜歡它。

我每天学习10-20个汉字。

I'm studying 中文 on my own in my spare time and I'm in the very beginning stages(halfway through hsk1)

Does the above text make sense? Are there any grammar mistakes? Could I improve on it without exceeding my current language level too much?

谢谢[emoji][emoji]

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Self intro?

我的名字是Alex。我是学生,我学习中文,生意, 电脑编程。我是匈牙利人,我住在日本。我的朋友是中国人她也住在日本,和她是英文在说很好。她的英文說得很好。

我喜欢电脑游戏,电影,我養的蛇和中国菜。

我每天学习10-20个汉字。

I'm studying 中文 on my own in my spare time and I'm in the very beginning stages(halfway through hsk1)

Does the above text make sense? Are there any grammar mistakes? Could I improve on it without exceeding my current language level too much?

谢谢[emoji][emoji]

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我的名字是Alex,我是学生,我正在学习中文、贸易及电脑程序。我是匈牙利人,目前住在日本,我的朋友是中国人,她也住在日本,而且她的英文说得很好。

我喜欢玩电脑游戏、看电影、吃中国菜,另外,我还养了一条蛇。

So, your pet is a snake?


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建議改成:她也住在日本而且她英文說得很好。
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Glad to help u Alex ! Haha, U keep a snake ??

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