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The Summer Holiday In China,somebody says," When the student who is good at study have a summer holiday,they will be better."Some students don't like study during the summer holidays.They always say,"Holidays just makes us relax,why should we study during summer holidays?"In fact,there are so much homework so they have to study. In my opinion,summer holiday is a chance to improve yourself.You can learn news lessons,learn to paly the guitar and so on.If you don't,the summer holiday is a waste of the time way for you. I wasted two holidays,I palyed comeputer games all the holiday.I am so regret for it.I will study during this summer holiday.I believe I can do it!

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The Summer Holiday

In China, somebody says, there is a saying (等于: 有一句话) ," When the student who is good at study have a summer holiday,they will be better." A hard working student has a summer holiday, they will improve. Some students don't like study during the summer holidays. They always say,"Holidays just makes us (这里的makes us 是 允许我们,还是给我们机会的意思?) relax, why should we study during the summer holidays?" In fact, there are so much homework so they have to study. (这句话请用中文说。我不懂)
In my opinion, the summer holiday is a chance to improve yourself. You can learn news new lessons, learn to paly play the guitar and so on. If you don't, the summer holiday is a waste of the time way for you.
I wasted two holidays, I palyed playing (play这个字拼错了两次要注意一下)comeputer computer games all the entire holiday. I am so regret for it (说后悔就说 I regret it 或者 I really regret it 就够了) .I will study during this summer holiday. I believe I can do it!


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