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Feel lonely sometimes :( These days I have heard a lot of good news from my friends like getting married, having a baby and something like that. There are no wondering that was happened if I think about my age, and I am happy with them. But I have been inclined to think about whether I am happy about my life or not. In my life, I have always wanted me to improve. I've believed that I should study or work harder and then I would get "a happy life." But, it must be funny, I haven't found out what makes me happy actually. I might feel the same uneasy feelings like on my mind now, even though I got something I feel I want like money, marriage and a high level of English skills etc. The one thing I am sure is the decision to come to the UK was fine. But sometimes, news from my friends in Japan make me lonely.

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Feel lonely sometimes :(

These days I have been hearing a lots of good news from my friends like we're getting married or we're having a baby and stuff like that. There are no wondering that was happened if I think about my age, and I am happy with them. But lately I have been inclined to think about whether I am happy with my life or not. In my life, I have always wanted me to improve myself. I've believed that I should study or work harder and then I would get "a happy life." But, it must be funny, I haven't found out what makes me happy actually. I might feel the same uneasy feelings like on my mind now, even though I got something I feel I want like money, marriage and a high level of English skills etc.

The one thing I am sure of is the decision to come to the UK was a good one. But sometimes, news from my friends in Japan makes me feel lonely.

Really nice job. Keep it up. 

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Feel lonely sometimes :(

These days, I have been heard hearing a lot of good news from my friends like getting married, having a baby and somethings like that. There It's are no wondering that was these things happened if I think about my age, and I am happy with for them. But I have been inclined to think about whether I am happy about my own life or not. In my life, I have always wanted me to improve strived for improvement. I've always believed that I should study or work harder and then I would get in order to obtain "a happy life." But, it must be isn't it funny? I haven't found out yet to find what makes me truly happy actually. I might feel the same uneasy feelings like as I do on my mind right now, even though I got have somethings to be grateful for in life. I feel as if I want things like money, marriage and a high level of English skills etc.

The one thing I am sure of is that the decision to come to the UK was fine right. But sometimes, news from my friends in Japan make me lonely.

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These days, I have been hearing a lot of good news from my friends like getting married, having a baby and things like that. It's no wonder these things happen if I think about my age, and I am happy for them. But I have been inclined to think about whether I am happy about my own life or not. In life, I have always strived for improvement. I've always believed that I should study or work harder in order to obtain "a happy life." But, isn't it funny? I have yet to find what makes me truly happy. I might feel the same uneasy feelings as I do on my mind right now, even though I have things to be grateful for in life. I feel as if I want things like money, marriage and a high level of English skills etc.

The one thing I am sure of is that the decision to come to the UK was right. But sometimes, news from my friends in Japan make me lonely.

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Feel lonely sometimes :(

These days I have been hearing lots of good news from my friends like "we're getting married!" or "we're having a baby!" and stufflike that. There are no wondering that was happened if I think about my age, and I am happy with them. But lately I have been inclined to think about whether I am happywith my life or not. In my life, I have always wanted to improve myself. I've believed that I should study or work harder and then I would get "a happy life." But, it must be funny, I haven't found out what makes me happy actually. I might feel the same uneasy feelings like on my mind now, even though I got something I feel I want like money, marriage and a high level of English skills etc.

The one thing I am sure of is the decision to come to the UK was a good one. But sometimes, news from my friends in Japan makes me feel lonely.
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Feel lonely sometimes :(

These days I have been hearing lots of good news from my friends like "we're getting married!" or "we're having a baby!" and stuff like that. There are no wondering that was happened if I think about my age, and I am happy with them. But lately I have been inclined to think about whether I am happy with my life or not. In my life, I have always wanted to improve myself. I've believed that I should study or work harder and then I would get "a happy life." But, it must be funny, I haven't found out what makes me happy actually. I might feel the same uneasy feelings like on my mind now, even though I got something I feel I want like money, marriage and a high level of English skills etc.

The one thing I am sure of is the decision to come to the UK was a good one. But sometimes, news from my friends in Japan makes me feel lonely.
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Tuyết Thank you for your comment. Yeah it's hard for us sometimes :( :(

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