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A bad habit (thanks for your revision) Over the years, tastes, fashions, and customs have changed. Something considered good, interesting or fashionable in the past, nowadays is considered a bad habit, for example, to smoke Several years ago, people who smoked were intelligent, beautiful, amazing, cool, the heroes in the films. Nevertheless, in the present moment, to smoke is considered a fairly awful habit. It started as a cool thing to do with my friends. I felt an older and pretty interesting person. I smoked in everywhere, at the disco, at the restaurants, at the job and at every time. One day I listened to a TV program the terrible effects of to smoke during years and this was my turning point. I knew I had to turn my life around and break out this bad habit. Since that moment I tried to drop up the tobacco, but it was pretty hard and sadly I came back to smoke two times. I had a huge willpower to drop out this bad habit and finally, I got it Let me finish by saying that stop smoking was one of the best decisions that I could take. If it weren’t for that TV program, I’d still be smoking. I don't smoke since sixteen years ago and I feel incredibly well.

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A bad habit (thanks for your revision)

Over the years, tastes, fashions, and customs change. Something once considered good, interesting or fashionable, is nowadays is considered bad, for example, smoking.
Several years ago, smokers were intelligent, beautiful, amazing, cool, the heroes in the films. Nevertheless, today smoking is considered a fairly awful habit.
It started as a cool thing to do with my friends. I felt an older and pretty interesting person. I smoked everywhere, at the disco, in restaurants, at work and all the time.
One day I listened to a TV program on the terrible effects of chronic smoking and this was my epiphany. I knew I had to turn my life around and break this bad habit.
Since that moment I tried to drop tobacco, but it was pretty hard and sadly I relapsed twice. I summoned all my willpower and finally dropped this bad habit.

Let me finish by saying that stopping smoking was one of the best decisions that I could have made. If it weren't for that TV program, I’d still be smoking. I haven't smoked for sixteen years and now I feel incredibly well.

Very well written!

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