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My first time... writing This is my first step. I think in spanish and is so difficult for me but I want to try it. I"ll make mistakes but let's go! Many years ago, my family lives in a farm and I dreamed with I get older in this place. I remember still the flowers' smell, the house's colors, the bird's songs. A winter's morning, mom was sad. She clean her tears and smiles for me. I understand everything, it was time for went away. The war, the damn war. Without nothing, just with pain in the soul. I promised me that I"ll go back someday because these was my little sky.

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My first time... writing

This is my first step.
I think in Spanish and it is so difficult for me but I want to try it.
I"ll make mistakes but let's go!

Many years ago, my family lived on a farm and I dreamed that l would get older in this place. I remember still the flowers' smell, the house's colors, the birdsong. One winter's morning, mom was sad. She wiped her tears and smiled for me. I understood everything, it was time to leave. The war, the damn war. With nothing, just a pain in the soul. I promised myself that I would return someday because that was my little heaven.

Very well written!

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My first time... writing

This is my first step.
I think in Spanish and it is so difficult for me but I want to try it.
I"ll make mistakes but let's go!

Many years ago, my family lived on a farm and I dreamed of growing up  with I get older in this place. I still remember the flowers' smell, the house's colors, the bird's songs. A winter's morning, mom was sad. She dried her tears and smiled at me. I understand everything, it was time for us to leave.  The war, the damn war. With nothing,  just with pain in the soul. I promised myself that I"d go back someday because these was my little sky.

The first posting is always the most difficult. You did a very good job! Congratulations! You also told us an interesting story of your life. Try to write a short posting every day or as often as you can. In a short time, the errors will start to disappear and you'll become a really good story teller. Keep writing.


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