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recicling lamp
The last weekend (OR: Last weekend,) , I was driving on (BETTER: along) the road, I saw some lumberjacks,cuttering some trees. I stopped the car and I sayid to them:
"Eexcuse me, could you please, give me a branch,?"
They saysid , s"Sure, tookake one."
I picked up one, and went to my home. (OR: "I picked one up and went home".
The next day I begingan to work with the branch.
I cut some part of it,, I sanded and I put some old cables on it...
sStep by step, my new lamp began to take shape.
I Ppainted it and I installed some other things,
and the finally the lamp was ready.
I really Iike the lamp and I am happy because all the materials are recycled.
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recicling lamp
The last weekend , I was driving on the road, I saw some lumberjacks,cuttering some trees, I stop the car and I say to them:
excuse me, could you please, give me a branch,
They says , sure, took one
I pick up one, and went to my home
The next day I beging to work with the brand,
I cut some part of it,, I sanded and I put some old cables...
step by step, my new lamp began to take shape
I Paint it and I installed other things,
and the finally the lamp was ready
I really Iike the lamp and I happy because all the materials are recycled
(I am new to this site. I hope this is ok.)
This last weekend as I was driving down the road, I saw some lumberjacks cutting down trees. I stopped the car and asked them “excuse me, could you please give me a branch”. They said “sure take one”. I picked one up and took it home. The next day I began working with the branch. I cut part of it. I sanded it. Then I put some old cable on it and step by step my new lamp began to take shape. I painted it, added some new parts and finally the lamp was ready. I really like the lamp and I am happy because all the materials are recycled.
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