More healthy life in the UK
It's been chilly these days. I heard it's going to be colder in few days like under 10 degree. I thought spring has come last week, but it hasn't come here yet.
Since I came here, my life style has become more healthy. First of all, the time I go to bed was changed. For example, I go to bed before midnight like 10 or 11 pm. I used to stay up late when I lived in Japan like until 1 am. I think it is because that what I can do at evening is limited. For instance, I can't do the laundry, cook nor take a shower after about 9 pm. Not impossible, but I don't want to bother my landlady and neighbors. And food was also changed. I used to eat what I bought at a convenience store for lunch in Japan. It was like fast food, and of course not healthy. But now, I usually cook my lunch and bring it to my office to save money. That's good my health for sure.
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Healthier life in the UK
It's been chilly these days. I heard it's going to be colder in few days like under 10 degree. I thought spring had (indirect speech) come last week, but it hasn't come here yet.Since I came here, my life style has become more healthy. First of all, the time I go to bed has changed. For example, I go to bed before midnight, like 10 or 11 pm. I used to stay up late when I lived in Japan, like until 1 am. I think it is because this what I can do at evening is limited. For instance, I can't do the laundry, cook nor take a shower after about 9 pm. Not impossible, but I don't want to bother my landlady and neighbors. Food has also changed (1). I used to eat what I bought at a convenience store for lunch in Japan. It was like fast food, and of course not healthy. But now, I usually cook my lunch and bring it to my office to save money. That's good for my health for sure.
1. You could write: Food has changed too
or
Food has changed as well
or
Food has also changed
There is no need to write this "and" since you have just written this "also"
Great job.
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Healthier life in the UK
It's been chilly these days. I heard it's going to be colder in few days, like under 10 degree. I thought spring had come last week, but it hasn't come here yet.Since I came here, my life style has become more healthy. First of all, the time I go to bed has changed. For example, I go to bed before midnight, like 10 or 11 pm. I used to stay up late when I lived in Japan, like until 1 am. I think it is because of this that what I can do in the evening is limited. For instance, I can't do the laundry, cook nor take a shower after about 9 pm. Not impossible, but I don't want to bother my landlady and neighbors. Food has also changed. I used to eat what I bought at a convenience store for lunch in Japan. It was like fast food, and of course not healthy. But now, I usually cook my lunch and bring it to my office to save money. That's good for my health for sure.
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Healthier life in the UK
It's been chilly these days. I heard it's going to be colder in few days, like under 10 degree. I thought spring had come last week, but it hasn't come here yet.Since I came here, my life style has become more healthy. First of all, the time I go to bedhas changed. For example, I go to bed before midnight, like 10 or 11 pm. I used to stay up late when I lived in Japan, like until 1 am. I think it is because of this that what I can do in the evening is limited. For instance, I can't do the laundry, cook nor take a shower after about 9 pm. Not impossible, but I don't want to bother my landlady and neighbors. Food has also changed. I used to eat what I bought at a convenience store for lunch in Japan. It was like fast food, and of course not healthy. But now, I usually cook my lunch and bring it to my office to save money. That's good formy health for sure.
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