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IF mom has the authority to control public space ?( please make corrections) It would be damn sure India look completely clean and green from all city why? because mom doesn’t leave the home without cleaning it each and every day. It never be a case of tomorrow in cleanliness. Mom doesn’t listen to someone when it comes to cleanliness whether it is a dad or it is a son, daughter. All moms are same their days start with their house and end their day at the house. They wake up ruminate about home task from small to big. And for government cleanliness is a small task which doesn’t bring profit to the government which implied that task is obsolete. But mom’s are very strict for their small task and big task. For example, mom’s focus remains same to clean bathroom as like to clean bedroom. They love aesthetic beauty which increments status of their house. For instance, when their relative visit their house and mom love comment on her house. If a single guest tried to criticise their house beauty. She put that comment on her unconscious mind. Always encore that in front her husband, son and daughter. However, the government doesn’t even care whether someone disrespects their society cleanliness. Government remain focus on most top priority task. It can be finance, politics and relationship with other government members. Mom handles every task effectively and never ignore small tasks. Mom always remains update about her home whether she is at home or she is out of town. For example, when mom goes out for holidays. She warns her child or husband to take care of the house. And always call at home each day to ask about “how is it going, Rahul ?” Once she few questions and her final remark end like “Don’t make too much mess and give little advice”. But government stop their municipal supplies without any guidance or warning. Therefore, people make a mess with public space and roads look untidy.

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What IF mom had the authority to control public space ?( please make corrections)

We could be damn sure India would look completely clean and green in every city.  Why? because mom doesn’t leave the home without cleaning it each and every day. It never be a case of cleanliness tomorrow. Mom doesn’t listen to someone when it comes to cleanliness whether it is a Dad or it is her son or daughter.
All moms are same: their days start with their house and they end their day at the house. They wake up ruminating about home tasks from small to big. But for the government cleanliness is a small task which doesn’t bring any profit, which implies that the task is unimportant. But moms are very strict about their small tasks and big tasks. For example, mom’s focus remains the same whether she is  cleaning the  bathroom or cleaning the  bedroom. They love aesthetic beauty which increases the  status of their house. For instance, when their relative visits their house,  moms love to get comments on their house. If a single guest tried to criticise the beauty of their  house,  that comment would play on her mind. [Always encore that in front her husband, son and daughter.? - I don't understand this.] However, the government doesn’t even care whether someone disrespects social cleanliness. Governments remain focus on most top priority tasks. It could be finance, politics, relationship with other governments or politicians. Mom handles every task effectively and never ignores small tasks.
Mom always remains up-to-date about her home whether she is at home or she is out of town. For example, when mom goes away for holidays, she warns her child or husband to take care of the house and always calls at home each day to ask  “how is it going, Rahul ?” Once she asked a few questions and her final remark was something like “Don’t make too much mess and give little advice”. But the government stop their municipal supplies [I don't know what this means] without any guidance or warning. Therefore, people make a mess with public space and roads looking untidy.

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