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My First even international trip... I think I should talk about my first ever International trip. almost for everyone, their first international trip is important because it is a gateway to the new world and you are stepping into a something new which you had never stepped ever before. Still, I can remember that night I had to fly. and I was impatient. for the moment to see me at the airport. to drag my trolley. as I had always seen in cinema. and I must say that day was a very long day for me in spite, it was a day of big celebration in India (Diwali festival) I was dreaming airport in my mind that too in the daytime, and I know it looks weird but it is the fact. Finally, the moment arises and sharp 12.00 Midnight. I was at the Delhi International Airport. as others family do, My Parents and my younger brother (Family) also came to see off me and that was the moment I can feel as fresh moment while writing this because I could see my dear mother was trying her best to hide her tears with her smile. but I could feel that blast of emotion in eyes. since I was also trying the same to hide my emotion... I would love to describe my journey further but this time I am feeling the same emotion and not in a situation to type anymore on this topic. as this feeling is indescribable ... Your feedback and corrections on above would be highly appreciated...

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My First ever international trip...

I think I should talk about my first ever International trip. For almost everyone, their first international trip is important because it is a gateway to a new world and you are stepping into a something new which you had never experienced ever before.

Still, I can remember the night I had to fly. and I was impatient. From the moment I found myself at the airport, to dragging my trolley, as I had always seen in cinema. I must say that it was a very long day for me in spite of the fact that it was a day of a big celebration in India (Diwali festival). I have also dreamed about the airport in daytime before, and I know that sounds weird but it is true.

Finally, the moment arrived and it was Midnight sharp. I was at the Delhi International Airport. My Parents and my younger brother also came to see me off as others families do.  That was the moment I can distinctly remember while writing this because I could see my dear mother was trying her best to hide her tears with her smile. But I could feel that blast of emotion in the eyes since I was also trying the same to hide my emotions...

I would love to describe my journey further but at this time I am feeling the same emotions and I am not able to type anymore on this topic, as this feeling is indescribable ...

Your feedback and corrections on above would be highly appreciated...
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your way for presentation and writing is interesting

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